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Unit six, exercises- replying to feedback

Post  Mahmoud on Sat Feb 28, 2009 10:37 pm

Credit: Eng215
Unit: Six
(A)

Read the following feedback from Safiya to Ahmed then write Ahmed's reply to it. Include the following:
©️ thank Safiya for the feedback
©️ accept one criticism and offer a solution
©️ ask for more details about one criticism

Dear Ahmed,
Thank you for your hard work on the Beamer project. It proved successful despite all the problems. You asked for some feedback, so here are some thoughts. Of course you have the right to accept, refuse and discuss them with me.
We are pleased that all the deadlines were met. But the problem is that you went over the budget. You need to control the finances better on the next project.
Moreover, some distributors complained that there are problems with the items. Try to deal with that. In addition, the staff felt that communication among them was not good. I hope you will find a solution for that.
I hope you are not angry with my comments. Let me know your opinion about them.
Regards,
Safiya


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Credit: Eng215
Unit: Six
(B)

Read the following feedback from Safiya to Ahmed then complete Ahmed's reply to it. Include the following:
©️ thank Safiya for the feedback
©️ agree with one criticism and offer a solution
©️ ask for more information about one criticism

Dear Ahmed,
Thank you for your hard work on the Beamer project. It proved successful despite all the problems. You asked for some feedback, so here are some thoughts. Of course you have the right to accept, refuse and discuss them with me.
We are happy that all the deadlines were met. But the problem is that you went over the budget. You need to control the finances better on the next project.
Moreover, some distributors complained that there are problems with the products. Try to deal with that. In addition, the workers felt that communication among them was not good. I hope you will find a solution for that.
I hope you are not angry with my comments. Let me know your opinion about them.
Regards,
Safiya



Dear ………………….,
Thanks a lot for your feedback on the Beamer project. It was really useful. I would like to discuss it with you in this email.
I agree with you that ………………………………………………….
………………………………………………………………………………and I will give laptops to workers to send emails and communicate better.
As for the second problem of the budget I ……………………………
…………………………………………………………………………………………………………. So please send me some more information about this problem.
I highly appreciate your views and thank you for support.
All the best,
Ahmed




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Credit: Eng215
Unit: Six
(C)
Read the following feedback from Safiya to Ahmed then finish Ahmed's reply to it. Include the following:
©️ thank Safiya for the feedback
©️ agree with one criticism and offer a solution
©️ ask for more information about one criticism

Dear Ahmed,
Thank you for your hard work on the Beamer project. It proved successful despite all the problems. You asked for some feedback, so here are some ideas. Of course you have the right to accept, refuse and discuss them with me.
We are happy that you finished all work on time. But the problem is that you went over the budget. You need to control the finances better on the next project.
Moreover, some distributors complained that there are problems with the products. Try to deal with that. In addition, the workers felt that communication among them was not good. I hope you will find a solution for that.
I hope you are not angry with my comments. Let me know your opinion about them.
Regards,
Safiya

Dear ………………….,
Thanks a lot for your feedback on the Beamer project. It was really useful. I would like to discuss it with you in this email.
I agree with you that communication within the team was not …………….. We can give ………………………………… to the workers to communicate with each other better.
As for the second problem of the budget, I did not ………………...
your comment. So please send me some more …………………….. about this problem.
I highly appreciate your views and thank you for support.
…………………………………
Ahmed

Use these words to fill in the spaces:

understand – good – All the best – information – Safiya – mobile phones

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